tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post3892741988973692674..comments2023-10-07T08:03:20.988-07:00Comments on The Rest of Your Mice: Daily Story 68: Rate of Exchangesodhnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00401977288481675599noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-47823488329525708162009-07-07T11:40:48.769-07:002009-07-07T11:40:48.769-07:00A bit late to reply, but for the record: I looked...A bit late to reply, but for the record: I looked at the sentence and had trouble fixing it, presumably in part because I already know what I'm trying to say so it's not confusing to me.<br /><br />I spent too much time trying to avoid making the sentence "way too long and [...] a bit confusing" and my brain snapped and did the opposite, which is why the story after this one was just <a href="http://therestofyourmice.blogspot.com/2009/06/daily-story-69-bulwer-lytton-can-suck.html" rel="nofollow">one long nasty sentence</a>.sodhnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00401977288481675599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-79920591847134067042009-06-25T00:03:55.342-07:002009-06-25T00:03:55.342-07:00Another fun one. :-)
I've been working on ref...Another fun one. :-)<br /><br /><em>I've been working on reformation [...] I can't even do.</em><br /><br />This sentence is way too long and is also a bit confusing. Other than that, very well done!Scratch Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07385517984319011510noreply@blogger.com