tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post4222207446086217474..comments2023-10-07T08:03:20.988-07:00Comments on The Rest of Your Mice: Daily Story 81: In Retrospectsodhnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00401977288481675599noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-38421233302978191422009-07-11T14:30:41.013-07:002009-07-11T14:30:41.013-07:00oh sorry I willl go back to that story.oh sorry I willl go back to that story.Odmomnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-52541637375628698392009-07-11T14:16:42.033-07:002009-07-11T14:16:42.033-07:00If you're referring to my comment, they're...If you're referring to my comment, they're not books - they're stories on this site. Disconsolate Exodus is the main one that's relevant in this case though.sodhnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00401977288481675599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-24419438113838257562009-07-11T11:33:22.811-07:002009-07-11T11:33:22.811-07:00I had trouble with this story but I have not read ...I had trouble with this story but I have not read the books so that may be why.Odmomnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-39233289974660248882009-07-09T11:02:25.975-07:002009-07-09T11:02:25.975-07:00That was perfect. Beautiful. Completely confused, ...That was perfect. Beautiful. Completely confused, and yet completely understandable.Scratch Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07385517984319011510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-49722784639635934742009-07-09T10:09:30.387-07:002009-07-09T10:09:30.387-07:00Thanks! Yeah, this takes place... er... third, I ...Thanks! Yeah, this takes place... er... third, I think, out of the six posted, and there will be at least a few more coming at some point because my brain is stuck in that world. I'd like one that takes place after <a href="http://therestofyourmice.blogspot.com/2009/06/daily-story-73-disconsolate-exodus.html" rel="nofollow">Disconsolate Exodus</a> but before <a href="http://therestofyourmice.blogspot.com/2009/05/daily-story-37-ebb-and-flow.html" rel="nofollow">Ebb and Flow</a>, and I know I'll have one that links <a href="http://therestofyourmice.blogspot.com/2009/05/daily-story-39-burial-at-sea.html" rel="nofollow">Burial at Sea</a> and <a href="http://therestofyourmice.blogspot.com/2009/04/daily-story-job-well-done.html" rel="nofollow">A Job Well Done</a> (which otherwise wouldn't seem connected at all) though due to my self-imposed robot naming convention that story won't happen until I've almost finished this whole project.<br /><br />I'm glad to hear the skipping wasn't too confusing, it's a fine line and it's really hard for me to tell when I've done it right because *I* already know what's going on.sodhnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00401977288481675599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5868677170057333329.post-11635464050854907582009-07-09T03:05:10.440-07:002009-07-09T03:05:10.440-07:00That was awesome in so many ways! Great to see a c...That was awesome in so many ways! Great to see a continuation from Disconsolate Exodus. I'd imagine it's really difficult to write a coherent and understandable short story using so many quickfire memory skips, so big kudos for it flowing so well and me not needing to re-read it 5 times to get what was going on!Andy Tnoreply@blogger.com