Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Daily Story 28: Malaria

There are no alarms from traffic control or the orbital defense net as we set down in Central Park. The only red light is the sensors indicating the atmosphere isn't safe, so we pull on our environmental suits before setting foot on Earth for the first time in two years.

Outside the city skyline is still recognizable, skyscrapers reaching three thousand feet into the air, but now the ads that used to scroll down them are gone. I've never seen the city dark before, never seen the actual surfaces under the lights. Beth is arguing with Liz about what the impurity in the air is, and Elliot taps me on the shoulder and gestures towards the buildings. I nod, and we head out.

There are vines everywhere, thick knotted green things wrapped around streetlights and reaching down into storm drains. I've seen them before, they were engineered for terraforming Mars. Elliot says that he saw them on our flyby, that they're everywhere. Someone planted them here for a reason, and that means whatever happened gave people enough time to try and prepare - so where are they? There should be vaults, arks, something. I had remained optimistic about the lack of transmissions as we re-entered the system, even when the Mars base appeared abandoned, the transports gone. But to see Earth this way; the cities dark, with no sign or beacon to say where anyone went...

Two miles into the city, and still the streets are empty except for vines and trash.

The sun is setting now, and Liz radios in to say they're going back into the ship for the night. I'm waiting in the street for Elliot, who is scavenging in a comic book store. The speaker in my helmet crackles and I hear him say there's something moving in the back, even if it's just a cat it would be wonderful. Then all I hear is screaming. When I get to the store I find Elliot's helmet, but no blood and no signs of a struggle.

The other three arrive within minutes, having hotwired a convertible. They look surreal, orange environmental suits on white leather seats. Liz takes a closer look at the Elliot's helmet and says the seal is damaged like it wasn't removed properly, but beyond that there are no clues.

Martin and Beth have their guns out, and they're checking the buildings around the comic store. Liz and I are just waiting, though we don't know for what. If the sensors are right, Elliot can't be alive without his helmet.

It's dark, darker than the city has ever been. The sun is hidden behind the forest of unlit buildings, and it feels like we're in a cave. Beth is radioing in. "I found Elliot, he's okay! He's just... oh god. Oh god, oh god, oh..." and the radio is quiet again, silent like the city. Liz starts the car without a word, and just as I'm getting in too I see Martin running towards us. He shoves past me, climbing into the car and screaming something at Liz. He's not transmitting so it's hard to hear, but we get the message.

On the drive back to our ship the only sound is the erratic thumping as we bounce over vines. Without lights from the city, the stars seem to burn brighter than ever before. I lean back and stare up at Mars, glittering a pale green above me.

6 comments:

  1. This was a good one. :-)

    The shortness of the story is a little bit frustrating, due to all the unanswered questions (was this two earth years after they left, or two subjective years? Why would the terraforming vines be useful? What happened to Elliot and Beth? What freaked Martin out so much? Why does the narrator seem so calm at the end? Does this all have something to do with Desmond? Where did all the whiteboards go?).

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  2. All spun up with excitement, wait, what happened? I have pretty much the same list of questions as Scratch Monkey.
    That was a good one.
    SQ

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  3. Well then... one person I can ignore, but if two have the same questions I have no choice but to answer.

    1. Was this two earth years after they left, or two subjective years?
    Two for them, slightly more for Earth - but close enough that it's not a big deal.

    2. Why would the terraforming vines be useful?
    No idea. Really there's no good reason to plant them on Earth that I can think of. I'd ask someone about it, but I can't seem to find anybody.

    3. What happened to Elliot and Beth?
    Well, Beth said Elliot was fine, so at least we know that much. Maybe Beth is fine too. Maybe they're having a nice tea party.

    4. What freaked Martin out so much?
    Well, he was too freaked out to remember to transmit, so it was kinda muffled. Possibly he realized that there was no sugar at the tea party, and he hates unsweetened tea.

    5. Why does the narrator seem so calm at the end?
    The narrator doesn't mind unsweetened tea at all.

    Also, shock. Also, the panic started way back when they arrived in the system, escalated when they saw that the Mars base was abandoned, and peaked when they saw Earth all dark. The narrator is all panicked-out.

    6. Does this all have something to do with Desmond?
    You figured it out. Desmond thought it would be great if everyone on Earth showed how much they appreciated this brave and adventurous crew. What better way to do that than a SURPRISE PARTY? Right after the end of the story they all jump out and yell 'SURPRISE' and everyone gets cake and punch.

    7. Where did all the whiteboards go?
    They're right where you left them, although the writing on one is all smeared because Elliot sprayed tea everywhere when the entire population of Earth jumped out and yelled.

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  4. Grammar NaziMay 14, 2009

    I am absolutely loving your writing style, creativity, and sense of humor. You totally rock.

    All that said, your pluralization does not match in your first sentence. It also does not here, "...beyond that there's no clues."

    Now I will make a grammar mistake so you can smugly disregard me as the Grammar Douche I am being. Everybody loves it when a person makes a gramatical error when they are correcting another person's grammar. Your welcome. :P

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  5. Thanks, Grammar Nazi! I've fixed that two pluralization issue.

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  6. AnonymousJuly 24, 2009

    Obviously a story about the undead.

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